CHANGES TO PRESENTATION:

This is a quick layout I did for the second and third panel to be improved. I think the new layout for the second panel would have explained the concept a bit better in terms of the light rail itself, as well a new third panel layout that would have brought our proposal together and given a more realistic impression:

I think we could have also created a better flow between the first and second panel. Maybe we could have introduced the actual light rail concept on the first panel which led into the second panel with how we are implementing the strategy. There is obviously nothing we can do about our final project 1 submission, so the only way is forward now and that means the actual designing of part of our scheme. We have a general outline of what we will do now (designing different nodes/entrances/gateways into Canberra) but we will have to discuss the fine details of where we will each go from here in this weeks tutorial!